posted by [identity profile] desfinado.livejournal.com at 02:54am on 10/09/2012
Oh wow, this story. I just.... it was beautiful, and human, and I had no idea how badly I've been aching for DANNY explored through fic - not just his body, but his character. It's complex, relateable, dynamic, and unique, totally different from the rest of him. God, you made me care SO MUCH MORE about him than I thought I already did, mmmmm.

I love how organically it develops, through Danny's relationship with Jackson and the explanations of how that relationship works (which is something I've always wondered about, from canon). I love that Danny has overheard Scott and Stiles' werewolf conversations because LOL OBVIOUSLY EVERYONE AT THEIR SCHOOL PROBABLY HAS. I love how much it makes sense for Danny and Stiles to spend time together, and how the little things about Stiles' character are revealed through Danny's observations - not just his bravado and need to belong, but his Fozzy Bear impression and moles. YES.

This is Stiles’ show. Danny came into this knowing that. Maybe it will always be that way between them; he doesn’t know yet.

This felt SO right when I read it, god yes. In a sex way, yes, unf unf unf, but also in so many other ways too.

The situation is so overwhelming that Danny is hovering on the other side of dealing. Mostly Stiles is so wretch that Danny wants to project a totally cool with this vibe so that Stiles will chill out. He’s learned over the years that when you project something hard enough you tend to internalize it after a while.

And THIS - and how Derek smells Danny and knows he'll be different from the other wolves... Danny IS different from all of them, and he's kind of AMAZING, too. It just felt so good to see him and Stiles being loved, acknowledged, for what unique and incredible people they are, and something just felt so right seeing them together. Sexy and RIGHT.

Honestly could read tens of thousands of more words about this. *_________* Beautiful. Thank you for sharing this!
 
posted by [identity profile] ethrosdemon.livejournal.com at 10:20pm on 10/09/2012
Ok, so this comment is amazing. I've not written fic in more than a year (ok, one story) so I'm out of practice with how genuinely gracious commenters can be. When I say thank you, please understand I mean a lot more than that.

Ugh, I'm at a loss at how to tell you how much I appreciate your comment. Fandom is great sometimes, you're doing everything right.
 
posted by [identity profile] desfinado.livejournal.com at 11:59pm on 10/09/2012
/o\ I maybe have a lot of feelings about your writing in general, so I'm SUPER amped you wrote something in this fandom! ♥ ♥

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